INTRODUCTION TO ADDITIONAL POEMS
Whitman published the poems in this section
outside of the First Edition (1855) or culminating edition
(1891-1892) of Leaves of Grass. “Poems Written before 1855”
includes all the poems Whitman published during the so-called
“seed-time of the Leaves”; these twenty-three poems date
from 1838 to the early 1850s. “Poems Excluded from the ‘Death-bed’
Edition” gathers the works published in other editions of Whitman’s
poetry but dropped from the “Death-bed” Edition of Leaves of
Grass (often cited as the “definitive” and “complete” edition,
though it by no means includes all of Whitman’s poetry). The
“Old Age Echoes” section contains a collection of thirteen
poems that first appeared in the 1897 edition of Leaves of
Grass. Whitman’s literary executor, Horace Traubel, claimed to
have received Whitman’s consent to publish this collection.
The reader is thus presented with all the poems
that Whitman approved of publishing—allegedly approved of,
in the case of Old Age Echoes—at some time during his life.
Spanning almost sixty years and ranging widely in quality, the
poems are interesting not only in their own right, but also for
Whitman’s reasons for excluding them from the definitive canon of
the “Death-bed” Edition.
POEMS WRITTEN BEFORE 1855
Musing about “long foreground” of Leaves of
Grass in his 1855 congratulatory letter to Whitman, Ralph Waldo
Emerson was one of the first readers to express curiosity about
Whitman’s beginnings as a poet. What had Whitman written before
1855 that hinted of such great things to come? Determined to create
a myth of his origins, Whitman did what he could to “cover his
tracks”: He destroyed significant amounts of manuscripts and
letters upon at least two occasions and frequently reminded himself
to “make no quotations, and no reference to any other
writers.—Lumber the writing with nothing.”
Sensitive to the public’s curiosity concerning his
development as a poet, but aware that much of his juvenilia was
readily available in old newspapers, Whitman decided to publish
some of his early pieces in an appendix to Collect (1882)
entitled “Pieces in Early Youth, 1834-‘42.” “My serious wish were
to have all those crude and boyish pieces quietly dropp’d in
oblivion—but to avoid the annoyance of their surreptitious issue,
(as lately announced, from outsiders), I have, with some qualms,
tack’d them on here,” he writes in Collect’s prefatory note.
And yet the four poems, nine short stories, and a “Talk to an
Art-Union” represented only a fraction of his early efforts;
additionally, the works were often heavily revised to hide flaws of
his early style.
Twenty-three poems written by Whitman were
published before 1855. The awkwardness of Whitman’s language and
the conventional rhyme schemes and imagery will surprise anyone
familiar with the energy and independence of his mature verse. Some
of these pieces (like “The Death and Burial of McDonald Clarke” and
“Young Grimes”) are directly imitative of popular poems of the
time; others (“The Mississippi at Midnight”) are sensationalistic;
still others (“Our Future Lot,” “The Punishment of Pride”) are
didactic or overtly pious. One senses the insecurities of Whitman
as man and artist: Trying so hard to please the average reader of
New York’s penny-daily newspapers, he has forgotten himself and his
own voice.
Yet there are signs of the great poetry to be
written in the next decade. “Resurgemus” and “The House of Friends”
indicate that Whitman’s political awareness was growing in the
early 1850s; his interest in diverse peoples and cultures is
exhibited in “The Spanish Lady” and “The Inca’s Daughter.” “Our
Future Lot” and “The Love That Is Hereafter” are written on the
themes of death and rebirth, key issues for his finest poems,
including “The Sleepers” and “Out of the Cradle Endlessly
Rocking.”
For more examples of Whitman’s pre-1855 writings,
see Thomas L. Brasher’s edition of Early Poems and the
Fiction (see “For Further Reading”), Emory Holloway’s edition
of Uncollected Poetry and Prose of Walt Whitman, and the
two-volume edition of The Journalism. Whitman’s temperance
novel, Franklin Evans (1842), is also available (New York: Random
House, 1929).
POEMS EXCLUDED FROM THE “DEATH-BED” EDITION (1891-1892)
Readying the final edition of Leaves of
Grass to be published in his lifetime, Whitman wrote in the
“Author’s Note”:
As there are now several editions of L. of G.,
different texts and dates, I wish to say that I prefer and
recommend this present one, complete, for future printing, if there
should be any.
As a result of this announcement, the 1891-1892
edition has been considered the “definitive” or “complete” edition
of his oeuvre.
There are several problems with the idea of
considering the “Death-bed” Edition as “definitive.” For one,
though the 1891-1892 edition contains Whitman’s greatest works, the
style and sometimes the language of these poems reflects Whitman’s
more controlled and conservative “late style” rather than the
original energy and rawness of his message in the 1850s and 1860s.
A quick comparison between the 1855 and 1891-1892 versions of “Song
of Myself” is a case in point. In time, Whitman substituted the
ellipses and irregular line lengths with more conventional
punctuation and more even-tempered flow of language; he also
removed blatantly provocative lines—“I hear the trained soprano....
she convulses me like the climax of my love-grip” on p. 57—with
more demure observations—“I hear the train’d soprano (what work
with hers is this?)” on p. 218. The “good gray poet” idea of
Whitman is a lifetime away from the young rebel of 1855, and
readers should be aware that the poetry reflects those changes in
Whitman the man and poet. Knowing where he began and ended is a
good way to gain a knowledge of the poet, but a stronger
understanding comes from looking into his “stops” along the
way—including the sexually charged 1860 edition, the strong
patriotism of Drum-Taps (1865), the melancholy dreaminess of
so many of the 1871 poems.
The 1891-1892 Edition of Leaves of Grass is
also not a “complete” edition, simply because Whitman dropped
earlier poems and pieces of poems along the way. Why did he do so?
The most obvious answer is that Whitman recognized the poorer
quality of certain pieces; at other times, however, the older poet
seems to have had second thoughts about an earlier opinion or
feeling. In the interest of providing a more nuanced view of the
poet’s work, this selection includes the poems that appeared in one
or more editions of Whitman’s poems but were omitted by Whitman
from the culminating edition of Leaves of Grass. In other
words, these are poems that might “fall through the cracks” for
readers acquainted only with Whitman’s two best-known
collections.
OLD AGE ECHOES (1897)
I said to W.W. today: “Though you have put the
finishing touches on the Leaves, closed them with your good-by, you
will go on living a year or two longer and writing more poems. The
question is, what will you do with these poems when the time comes
to fix their place in the volume?” “Do with them? I am not
unprepared—I have even contemplated that emergency—1 I have a title
in reserve: Old Age Echoes—applying not so much to things as to
echoes of things, re verberant, an aftermath.”
Whitman’s friend and literary executor Horace
Traubel records this 1891 conversation in the preface to Old Age
Echoes, a collection of thirteen poems added to the 1897
Edition of Leaves of Grass. Whitman, who died in 1892, did
not see or approve of this collection; in fact, Traubel seems to
have changed some of the titles himself. But Traubel does claim
that it was one of Whitman’s final wishes to “collect a lot of
prose and poetry pieces—small or smallish mostly, but a few
larger—appealing to the good will, the heart—sorrowful ones not
rejected—but no morbid ones given.”
The thirteen works date from 1855 to Whitman’s
actual death bed (Traubel noted that “A Thought of Columbus” was
Whitman’s “last deliberate composition”) and range in quality from
sketches for longer projects (“Then Shall Perceive”) to carefully
revised works (“Supplement Hours”) and even a few previously
published poems (such as “A Kiss to the Bride” and “Death’s
Valley”).
—Karen Karbiener