COMMENTS & QUESTIONS
In this section, we aim to provide the reader
with an array of perspectives on the text, as well as questions
that challenge those perspectives. The commentary has been culled
from sources as diverse as reviews contemporaneous with the work,
letters written by the author, literary criticism of later
generations, and appreciations written throughout the work’s
history. Following the commentary, a series of questions seeks to
filter Walt Whitman’s Leaves of Grass through a variety of points
of view and bring about a richer understanding of this enduring
work.
COMMENTS
RALPH WALDO EMERSON
I am not blind to the worth of the wonderful
gift of “Leaves of Grass.” I find it the most extraordinary piece
of wit and wisdom that America has yet contributed. I am very happy
in reading it, as great power makes us happy. It meets the demand I
am always making of what seemed the sterile and stingy Nature, as
if too much handiwork, or too much lymph in the temperament, were
making our western wits fat and mean.
I give you joy of your free and brave thought. I
have great joy in it. I find incomparable things said incomparably
well, as they must be. I find the courage of treatment which so
delights us, and which large perception only can inspire.
I greet you at the beginning of a great career,
which yet must have had a long foreground somewhere, for such a
start. I rubbed my eyes a little, to see if this sunbeam were no
illusion; but the solid sense of the book is a sober certainty. It
has the best merits, namely, of fortifying and encouraging.
I did not know until I, last night, saw the book
advertised in a newspaper, that I could trust the name as real and
available for a post-office. I wish to see my benefactor, and have
felt much like striking my tasks, and visiting New York to pay you
my respects.
-from a letter to Walt Whitman (July 21,
1855)
CHARLES A. DANA
[Whitman‘s] Leaves of Grass are doubtless
intended as an illustration of the natural poet. They are certainly
original in their external form, have been shaped on no
pre-existent model out of the author’s own brain. Indeed, his
independence often becomes coarse and defiant. His language is too
frequently reckless and indecent though this appears to arise from
a naive unconsciousness rather than from an impure mind. His words
might have passed between Adam and Eve in Paradise, before the want
of fig-leaves brought no shame; but they are quite out of place
amid the decorum of modern society, and will justly prevent his
volume from free circulation in scrupulous circles. With these
glaring faults, the Leaves of Grass are not destitute of
peculiar poetic merits, which will awaken an interest in the lovers
of literary curiosities. They are full of bold, stirring
thoughts—with occasional passages of effective description,
betraying a genuine intimacy with Nature and a keen appreciation of
beauty—often presenting a rare felicity of diction, but so
disfigured with eccentric fancies as to prevent a consecutive
perusal without offense, though no impartial reader can fail to be
impressed with the vigor and quaint beauty of isolated
portions.
—from an unsigned article in the
New York Daily Tribune (July 23, 1855)
New York Daily Tribune (July 23, 1855)
WALT WHITMAN
An American bard at last! One of the roughs,
large, proud, affectionate, eating, drinking, and breeding, his
costume manly and free, his face sunburnt and bearded, his posture
strong and erect, his voice bringing hope and prophecy to the
generous races of young and old. We shall cease shamming and be
what we really are. We shall start an athletic and defiant
literature. We realize now how it is, and what was most lacking.
The interior American republic shall also be declared free and
independent....
Self-reliant, with haughty eyes, assuming to
himself all the attributes of his country, steps Walt Whitman into
literature, talking like a man unaware that there was hitherto such
a production as a book, or such a being as a writer. Every move of
him has the free play of the muscle of one who never knew what it
was to feel that he stood in the presence of a superior. Every word
that falls from his mouth shows silent disdain and defiance of the
old theories and forms. Every phrase announces new laws; not once
do his lips unclose except in conformity with them. With light and
rapid touch he first indicates in prose the principles of the
foundation of a race of poets so deeply to spring from the American
people, and become ingrained through them, that their Presidents
shall not be the common referees so much as that great race of
poets shall.
—from an unsigned review of
Leaves of Grass in United States Review (September 1855)
Leaves of Grass in United States Review (September 1855)
FANNY FERN
Well baptized: fresh, hardy, and grown for the
masses. Not more welcome is their natural type to the winter-bound,
bed-ridden, and spring-emancipated invalid. Leaves of Grass
thou art unspeakably delicious, after the forced, stiff, Parnassian
exotics for which our admiration has been vainly challenged.
Walt Whitman, the effeminate world needed thee.
The timidest soul whose wings ever drooped with discouragement,
could not choose but rise on thy strong pinions.
-from the New York Ledger (May
10,1856)
WILLIAM DEAN HOWELLS
We are to suppose that Mr. Whitman first adopted
his method as something that came to him of its own motion. This is
the best possible reason, and only possible excuse, for it. In its
way, it is quite as artificial as that of any other poet, while it
is unspeakably inartistic. On this account it is a failure. The
method of talking to one’s self in rhythmic and ecstatic prose is
one that surprises at first, but, in the end, the talker can only
have the devil for a listener, as happens in other cases when
people address their own individualities; not, however, the devil
of the proverb, but the devil of reasonless, hopeless, all-defying
egotism. An ingenious French critic said very acutely of Mr.
Whitman that he made you partner of the poetical enterprise, which
is perfectly true; but no one wants to share the enterprise. We
want its effect, its success; we do not want to plant corn, to hoe
it, to drive the crows away, to gather it, husk it, grind it, sift
it, bake it, and butter it, before eating it, and then take the
risk of its being at last moldy in our mouths. And this is what you
have to do in reading Mr. Whitman’s rhythm.
—from Round Table (November 11,
1865)
HENRY JAMES
The most that can be said of Mr. Whitman’s
vaticinations is, that, cast in a fluent and familiar manner, the
average substance of them might escape unchallenged. But we have
seen that Mr. Whitman prides himself especially on the
substance—the life—of his poetry. It may be rough, it may be grim,
it may be clumsy—such we take to be the author’s argument—but it is
sincere, it is sublime, it appeals to the soul of man, it is the
voice of a people. He tells us, in the lines quoted, that the words
of his book are nothing. To our perception they are everything, and
very little at that. A great deal of verse that is nothing but
words has, during the war, been sympathetically sighed over and cut
out of newspaper corners, because it has possessed a certain simple
melody. But Mr. Whitman’s verse, we are confident, would have
failed even of this triumph, for the simple reason that no triumph,
however small, is won but through the exercise of art, and that
this volume is an offense against art. It is not enough to be grim
and rough and careless; common sense is also necessary, for it is
by common sense that we are judged. There exists in even the
commonest minds, in literary matters, a certain precise instinct of
conservatism, which is very shrewd in detecting wanton
eccentricities. To this instinct Mr. Whitman’s attitude seems
monstrous. It is monstrous because it pretends to persuade the soul
while it slights the intellect; because it pretends to gratify the
feelings while it outrages the taste. The point is that it does
this on theory, wilfully, consciously, arrogantly. It is the little
nursery game of “open your mouth and shut your eyes.” Our hearts
are often touched through a compromise with the artistic sense, but
never in direct violation of it. Mr. Whitman sits down at the
outset and counts out the intelligence.
—from an unsigned review of
Drum-Taps in The Nation (November 16, 1865)
Drum-Taps in The Nation (November 16, 1865)
WILLIAM DOUGLAS O‘CONNOR
Walt Whitman’s [Leaves of Grass] is a
poem which Schiller might have hailed as the noblest specimen of
naïve literature, worthy of a place beside Homer. It is, in the
first place, a work purely and entirely American, autochthonic,
sprung from our own soil; no savor of Europe nor of the past, nor
of any other literature in it; a vast carol of our own land, and of
its Present and Future; the strong and haughty psalm of the
Republic. There is not one other book, I care not whose, of which
this can be said.
—from The Good Gray Poet: A Vindication
(1866)
JOHN BURROUGHS
When Leaves of Grass was written and
published, the author was engaged in putting up small frame houses
in the suburbs of Brooklyn, partly with his own hands and partly
with hired help. The book was still-born. To a small job printing
office in that city belongs the honor, if such, of bringing it to
light. Some three score copies were deposited in a neighboring book
store, and as many more in another book store in New York. Weeks
elapsed and not one was sold. Presently there issued requests from
both the stores that the thin quarto, for such it was, should be
forthwith removed. The copies found refuge in a well-known
phrenological publishing house in Broadway, whose proprietors
advertised it and sent specimen copies to the journals and to some
distinguished persons. The journals remained silent, and several of
the volumes sent to the distinguished persons were returned with
ironical and insulting notes. The only attention the book received
was, for instance, the use of it by the collected attaches
of a leading daily paper of New York, when at leisure, as a butt
and burlesque—its perusal aloud by one of the party being
equivalent to peals of ironical laughter from the rest.
A small but important occurrence seems to have
turned the tide. This was the appearance of a letter from the most
illustrious literary man in America, brief, but containing a
magnificent eulogium of the book. A demand arose, and before many
months all the copies of the thin quarto were sold. At the present
date, a curious person, poring over the shelves of second-hand book
stalls in side places of the city, may light upon a copy of this
quarto, for which the stall-keeper will ask him treble its first
price. Leaves of Grass, considerably added to, and printed
in the new shape of a handy 16mo. of about 350 pages, again
appeared in 1857. This edition also sold. The newspaper notices of
it both here and in Great Britain were numerous, and nearly all of
them scoffing, bitter and con demnatory. The most general charge
made was that it had passages of serious indelicacy....
The full history of the book, if it could ever be
written, would be a very curious one. No American work has ever
before excited at once such diametrically opposite judgments, some
seeing in it only matter for ridicule and contempt; others, eminent
in the walks of literature, regarding it as a great American poem.
Its most enthusiastic champions are young men, and students and
lovers of nature; though the most pertinent and suggestive
criticism of it we have ever seen, and one that accepted it as a
whole, was by a lady—one whose name stands high on the list of our
poets. Some of the poet’s warmest personal friends, also, are women
of this mould. On the other hand, the most bitter and vindictive
critic of him of whom we have heard was a Catholic priest, who
evoked no very mild degree of damnation upon his soul; if, indeed,
we except the priestly official at the seat of government who, in
administering the affairs of his department, on what he had the
complacency to call Christian principles, took occasion, for reason
of the poet’s literary heresies alone, to expel him from a position
in his office. Of much more weight than the opinion of either of
these Christian gentlemen is the admiration of that Union soldier
we chanced to hear of, who by accident came into possession of the
book, and without any previous knowledge of it or its author, and
by the aid of his mother wit alone, came to regard it with feelings
akin to those which personal friendship and intercourse alone
awaken; carrying it in his knapsack through three years of
campaigning on the Potomac, and guarding it with a sort of jealous
affection from the hands of his comrades.
-from Galaxy (December 1, 1866)
ROBERT LOUIS STEVENSON
[Whitman‘s] book, he tells us, should be read
“among the cooling influences of external nature”; and this
recommendation, like that other famous one which Hawthorne prefixed
to his collected tales, is in itself a character of the work. Every
one who has been upon a walking or a boating tour, living in the
open air, with the body in constant exercise and the mind in
fallow, knows true ease and quiet. The irritating action of the
brain is set at rest; we think in a plain, unfeverish temper;
little things seem big enough, and great things no longer
portentous; and the world is smilingly accepted as it is. This is
the spirit that Whitman inculcates and parades. He thinks very ill
of the atmosphere of parlours or libraries. Wisdom keeps school
outdoors. And he has the art to recommend this attitude of mind by
simply pluming himself upon it as a virtue; so that the reader, to
keep the advantage over his author which most readers enjoy, is
tricked into professing the same view. And this spirit, as it is
his chief lesson, is the greatest charm of his work. Thence, in
spite of an uneven and emphatic key of expression, something
trenchant and straightforward, something simple and surprising,
distinguishes his poems. He has sayings that come home to one like
the Bible. We fall upon Whitman, after the works of so many men who
write better, with a sense of relief from strain, with a sense of
touching nature, as when one passes out of the flaring, noisy
thoroughfares of a great city into what he himself has called, with
unexcelled imaginative justice of language, “the huge and
thoughtful night.” And his book in consequence, whatever may be the
final judgment of its merit, whatever may be its influence on the
future, should be in the hands of all parents and guardians as a
specific for the distressing malady of being seventeen years old.
Green-sickness yields to his treatment as to a charm of magic; and
the youth, after a short course of reading, ceases to carry the
universe upon his shoulders.
-from Familiar Studies of Men and Books
(1882)
WILLIAM JAMES
Walt Whitman owes his importance in literature
to the systematic expulsion from his writings of all contractile
elements. The only sentiments he allowed himself to express were of
the expansive order; and he expressed these in the first person,
not as your mere monstrously conceited individual might so express
them, but vicariously for all men, so that a passionate and mystic
ontological emotion suffuses his words, and ends by persuading the
reader that men and women, life and death, and all things are
divinely good.
Thus it has come about that many persons to-day
regard Walt Whitman as the restorer of the eternal natural
religion. He has infected them with his own love of comrades, with
his own gladness that he and they exist. Societies are actually
formed for his cult; a periodical organ exists for its propagation,
in which the lines of orthodoxy and heterodoxy are already
beginning to be drawn; hymns are written by others in his peculiar
prosody; and he is even explicitly compared with the founder of the
Christian religion, not altogether to the advantage of the
latter.
-from The Varieties of Religious
Experience (1902)
EZRA POUND
His crudity is an exceeding great stench, but it
is America. He is the hollow place in the rock that echoes with his
time. He does ‘chant the crucial stage’ and he is the ’voice
triumphant.‘ He is disgusting. He is an exceedingly nauseating
pill, but he accomplishes his mission.
-from “What I Feel About Walt Whitman” (1909),
in
Selected Prose: 1909—1965 (1973)
Selected Prose: 1909—1965 (1973)
D. H. LAWRENCE
Whitman was the first to break the mental
allegiance. He was the first to smash the old moral conception,
that the soul of man is something “superior” and “above” the flesh.
Even Emerson still maintained this tiresome “superiority” of the
soul. Even Melville could not get over it. Whitman was the first
heroic seer to seize the soul by the scruff of her neck and plant
her down among the potsherds.
-from Studies in Classic American
Literature (1923)
LANGSTON HUGHES
Walt Whitman wrote without the frills,
furbelows, and decorations of conventional poetry, usually without
rhyme or measured pretti ness. Perhaps because of his simplicity,
timid poetry lovers over the years have been frightened away from
his Leaves of Grass, poems as firmly rooted and as brightly growing
as the grass itself. Perhaps, too, because his all-embracing words
lock arms with workers and farmers, Negroes and whites, Asiatics
and Europeans, serfs and freemen, beaming democracy to all, many
academic-minded intellectual isolationists in America have little
use for Whitman, and so have impeded his handclasp with today by
keeping him imprisoned in silence on library shelves. Still his
words leap from their pages and their spirit grows steadily
stronger everywhere.
—“The Ceaseless Rings of Walt Whitman,” in
I Hear the People Singing: Selected Poems of Walt Whitman (1946)
I Hear the People Singing: Selected Poems of Walt Whitman (1946)
ALLEN GINSBERG
Where are we going, Walt Whitman? The doors
close in a hour.
Which way does your beard point tonight?
(I touch your book and dream of our odyssey in the
supermarket and feel absurd.)
Will we walk all night through solitary streets? The trees add shade
to shade, lights out in the houses, we’ll both be lonely.
Will we stroll dreaming of the lost America of love past
blue automobiles in driveways, home to our silent cottage?
Ah, dear father, graybeard, lonely old courage-teacher,
what America did you have when Charon quit poling his ferry
and you got out on a smoking bank and stood watching
the boat disappear on the black waters of Lethe?
Which way does your beard point tonight?
(I touch your book and dream of our odyssey in the
supermarket and feel absurd.)
Will we walk all night through solitary streets? The trees add shade
to shade, lights out in the houses, we’ll both be lonely.
Will we stroll dreaming of the lost America of love past
blue automobiles in driveways, home to our silent cottage?
Ah, dear father, graybeard, lonely old courage-teacher,
what America did you have when Charon quit poling his ferry
and you got out on a smoking bank and stood watching
the boat disappear on the black waters of Lethe?
from “A Supermarket in California” (1955)
PABLO NERUDA
There are many kinds of greatness, but let me
say (though I be a poet of the Spanish tongue) that Walt Whitman
has taught me more than Spain’s Cervantes: in Walt Whitman’s work
one never finds the ignorant being humbled, nor is the human
condition ever found offended.
We continue to live in a Whitmanesque age, seeing
how new men and new societies rise and grow, despite their
birth-pangs. Walt Whitman was the protagonist of a truly
geographical personality: the first man in history to speak with a
truly continental American voice, to bear a truly American
name.
-from “We Live in a Whitmanesque Age” in
the New York Times (April 14, 1972)
the New York Times (April 14, 1972)
ALICIA OSTRIKER
But what moves me, and I suspect other American
women poets, is less the agreeable programmatic utterances than the
gestures whereby Whitman enacts the crossing of gender categories
in his own person. It is not his claim to be “of the woman” that
speeds us on our way but his capacity to be shamelessly receptive
as well as active, to be expansive on an epic scale without a shred
of nostalgia for narratives of conquest, to invent a rhetoric of
power without authority, without hierarchy, and without violence.
The omnivorous empathy of his imagination wants to incorporate All
and therefore refuses to represent anything as unavailably Other.
So long as femaleness in our culture signifies Otherness, Whitman’s
greed is our gain.
—from “Loving Walt Whitman and the Problem of
America,” in
The Continuing Presence of Walt Whitman (1992)
The Continuing Presence of Walt Whitman (1992)
QUESTIONS
1. Why do you think Whitman is so often thought
of as prototypically American? Is it because of his inclusiveness?
His “barbaric yawp,” as he called it? His refusal to adhere to
traditional forms? His optimism?
2. In 1882 the district attorney of Boston,
Oliver Stevens, sent publisher James R. Osgood an order to stop
publication of Leaves of Grass on the grounds that it
violated “the Public Statutes concerning obscene literature.” Do
you see any lines in Leaves as obscene or, in any case, as
an outrage to public decency? You may want to examine closely the
poems Osgood wanted Whitman to remove or change, such as “A Woman
Waits for Me,” “Spontaneous Me,” and “The Dalliance of the
Eagles.”
3. How would you formulate Whitman’s
spirituality? Is it Christian? Just a loose religiosity? A body
mystique? A version of an Asian religion, such as Buddhism?
4. Whitman maintained strong sympathies for
women’s rights activists, such as Abby Price and Frances Wright.
But D. H. Lawrence criticized Whitman’s descriptions of
women—“athletic mothers of the states... depressing. Muscle and
wombs—functional creatures—no more.” What is your own take on
Whitman’s treatment of women?