Chapter Fifteen
‘Horrors! Horrors, Denton! I want horrors.’
Diapason Lang had been his English editor since
Denton’s second book. Lang was older than Denton, almost emaciated,
his skin taut over his cheekbones but ruddy with good health. His
father had been a noted organist, hence the first name. Denton
liked him well enough but found Lang’s seemingly wilful
mislabelling of his books as ‘horror’ irritating. More than
irritating, in fact.
He had come to his publishers by way of Mrs
Johnson’s, charging her again to mobilize her women for an assault
on the Metropolitan Schools Board. She had, with a toughness she
usually masked, pointed out that the women hadn’t been paid in full
as yet. Embarrassed, Denton had stood at her door and counted out
notes, then coins, not finding it easy to make up the total. ‘The
bonus - for finding each Mulcahy - ah, I’ll bring that by - another
time—’ He had walked away very quickly.
And so he had come to his publishers. The firm was
in a narrow building off Fleet Street, only two houses from the one
once occupied by Izaak Walton; it had a look of untidiness that
correctly embodied the business it housed: door jambs tilted,
floors sagged, cracks in the plaster had become so
institutionalized that baseboards had been cut to accommodate them.
Yet the firm itself was a good one with a notable backlist in
fiction and botany, the combination pure accident, the reasons no
longer remembered. Diapason Lang had been with them for more than
thirty years and was in good part responsible for the fiction list.
A type not unknown among editors, he often misunderstood the books
he selected but selected well, nonetheless. Like his saying now,
‘Horrors, Denton! I want horrors!’ Then he leaned forward and said,
as if they were friends with a common passion, ‘You
know!’
In fact, Denton didn’t know. He would never have
told Lang that he was there because if he didn’t get some money,
his manservant was going to leave him; and he hadn’t yet had the
gumption to tell Lang that he had decided to abandon the book that
he was due to deliver in three months. Or - the worst - that he
nonetheless wanted another advance. ‘I’m never quite sure what you
mean by “horror”,’ he muttered. Playing for time.
Denton hadn’t started out to be a horror writer -
if that’s what he was, and he didn’t see it - or in fact to be a
writer at all. All he’d managed to become after the war was a
failing young farmer who didn’t know he was failing, able to keep
going by not adding up his debts. Then, after he failed completely
and everything was gone, his wife dead and his sons sent off to his
sister because he had failed as a father, too, he had gone farther
west and rattled about, done his marshalling, gone on to
California. Then he’d begun writing because his head was so stuffed
with sorrow he thought it would burst, and he had had to get it
out. He had written half of a novel called William Read
before he realized it was self-pitying claptrap - more failure.
Then, disciplining the self-pity by realizing that it was not the
same thing as sorrow, he had begun to set down experiences as if he
were writing instructions on how to harness a team to a plough, and
the result was The Demon of the Plains. That first novel
ended with the farmer-hero hanging himself in the barn he had built
with his own hands, and his body being wrapped in a horse blanket,
already frozen, and stacked with the cordwood until the ground
might thaw enough to bury him. Denton had found his method: a
plain, unfeeling style that embodied appalling events.
The Demon of the Plains had given him a
reputation beyond America. The French had made comparisons to Poe
(whom he despised), the English to Le Fanu (whom he didn’t know).
In fact, he saw no horror in The Demon of the Plains except
the horror of solitude and unending labour and failure, and the
hero’s sense that a force, a demon or perhaps a ghost of the
Indians who had lived there, persecuted him. Denton thought he had
made it clear that the demon was only in the character’s mind, a
way of making the untractable and the appalling comprehensible, but
the word ‘demon’ set people going. When his second book, At
Battle’s End, proved to have ghosts in it (who were not ghosts
to him but fantasies of the war-maddened hero’s collapse), the word
‘horror’ was everywhere in the reviews. At Lang’s urging (at that
time not yet met in the attenuated flesh, expressed as a letter to
his American publisher), his third book was titled Jonas
Sniden’s Horrors, and it was compared favourably to the
Stevenson of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde. Diapason Lang, when they
finally met in the late nineties, had told him he was the best
horror writer in the English language.
It had made Denton squirm.
Now Lang bent forward over his desk. ‘We English
love horrors. It comes from hiding everything from us as
children; we have dreadful nightmares. Unaskable questions answered
out of our imaginations. Do you know my picture of the
nightmare?’
Lang had spoken of it before, so of course he knew
it; Lang in fact had a print on the wall, was pointing at it with a
bony finger without turning his eyes towards it. Elihu Vedder.
Denton nodded. ‘I suppose it refers to something sexual,’ Denton
said. It showed a hideous figure - demonic but certainly male -
crouching over a nude woman in a bed. He thought of Janet Striker’s
idea of men and women.
Lang looked pained. ‘Americans are so much more
outspoken than we are.’ Now he glanced at the painting. ‘Perhaps -
perhaps. You think she’s having a nightmare about the sex act
itself ?’ His voice was high, a bit cracked. ‘Fearing it? All women
do, you know.’
‘Not knowing what it is, more likely. But possessed
by it.’
‘It isn’t titled “Desire”, my boy. I’ve never asked
a woman what she thought the painting meant. Nor would I, of
course.’ He tittered. Lang’s sexual preferences were matters of
speculation but no evidence.
Denton smiled. ‘I don’t think it’s just children
you English keep things from.’
‘There are some things one doesn’t mention. To
women, I mean.’
Denton thought that Lang travelled in the wrong
circles. Among Emma Gosden’s friends, anything could be said; the
same was true among the artists who clustered at the Café Royal.
Denton looked again at the painting. And, he suspected, anything
could be said to Janet Striker. ‘I had a man tell me recently that
he’d been watching another man cut a woman’s throat while coupled
with her. Maybe that’s what the nightmare is.’
Lang blinked. ‘Ah. Mmm.’ He grew cheerful. ‘Might
be a book in that.’
‘The sex act itself a kind of murder,’ Denton said,
still looking at the picture. Like his wedding night. The blood, of
course. He shook the idea off. ‘I wanted to see you, Lang.’
‘Yes, yes, yes, and I wanted to see you! I have an
idea - a horrible idea!’ He cackled. ‘But routine business
first - how’s the new book coming?’
There it was. Denton looked into his eyes, pursed
his lips, said, ‘I’ve thrown it into the trash.’
Lang tried blankness, then a titter - it must be an
American joke, he seemed to imply - then severity. ‘You’re not
serious.’
‘I’m afraid I am.’ He tried to explain the
revelation he’d had while he’d talked with Janet Striker - the
woman not a real woman, the marriage all wrong, the book sick at
its very heart.
‘I’ve always thought your women quite good,’ Lang
moaned. Denton didn’t say that this might say more about Lang than
about Denton’s women, or that perhaps Hench-Rose had been right
when he’d said Denton knew nothing about women. He brushed residual
drops of rain from his hat, which was on his lap; the warren of
publishing offices had no place for visitors’ clothes - hardly room
for visitors, in fact. ‘But you can’t have thrown it out,’
Lang said. ‘You can’t!’
‘I did.’
‘It’s what first novelists do. It’s what
young men do.’
‘I have a better idea. A new book.’
‘Pull it out of the trash, Denton, we can salvage
it. I can salvage it.’
Denton waved a hand. ‘I’ve got a better idea, I
told you.’ Lang looked sick, then profoundly annoyed, then, with an
effort, attentive - that smiling, wide-eyed look that women learn
to put on when men talk. ‘It’s called The Machine,’ Denton
said.
‘The Machine. A little too H. G.
Wells?’
Denton sketched it for him: a young husband and
wife who build together the machine that destroys them, their
marriage.
‘But a machine? I’d think something organic would
be more likely, something that they nurture—’
‘I see it as a machine.’
‘Well - of course, it’s your idea—’ Lang sounded
dubious. ‘Rather fashionable, perhaps - machines, I mean. Fear of
the clang and bang of modern life, the dark Satanic mills, all
that. Motor cars.’ He raised his eyebrows and waved a hand.
‘But a machine as the embodiment of horror, Denton—’
‘Oh, forget your damned horror!’
‘Oh, dear, oh, no—’
‘Lang, the horror is something you’ve all read into
the books. I write about people, about suffering, about—’
Lang waved his fingers again. ‘Writers don’t know
what they write about. It’s horror, take my word for it. But a
machine, oh dear—’ He tittered. ‘Perhaps a runaway motor car with
an evil engine? Something that goes about murdering people at
crossings? You’re not amused, I see.’
Denton put his hands on the desk and spoke slowly
and with great emphasis. ‘Lang, I need money!’
‘Ah. Oh, it’s that way.’
‘It’s exactly that way.’
Lang looked about as if for a secret exit he’d
forgotten the exact location of. ‘I suppose we could do
something—’
‘My royalty account.’
‘Statements aren’t due yet, you know.’
‘But there’s money you owe me. There always
is!’
‘Well, I suppose—Oh, well, of course - as you’re
such a pillar of the backlist—’ He rang a little bell. Heavy
footsteps sounded in the corridor, and a young man materialized in
the doorway. Lang cleared his throat. ‘Ask Mr Frewn to step around,
please, Meer.’
The heavy footsteps went away, went up some stairs,
faded. Lang tapped on his desk. He said, ‘Frewn doesn’t get around
as well as he used to.’ Denton put his coat and hat on the floor
and crossed his legs. When slow, light footsteps sounded overhead,
Lang smiled and murmured, ‘There we are,’ but it was another long
silence, marked by increasingly loud footsteps, before a
white-haired, bent man looked in. His black suit hung on him,
giving him the look of a wet raven. In a surprisingly deep voice,
he said, ‘You wanted something?’
‘Mr Denton - you know Mr Denton, one of our best
authors, one of our most successful authors, Frewn - would
like a cheque for the balance current in his account.’
The old man stared at Lang, then at Denton, as if
he couldn’t believe his own rather large ears. ‘A
cheque?’
‘Yes. Now, we’ve done this before, Mr Frewn - you
remember, I’m sure, it can’t have been more than half a dozen years
ago—’
Frewn shook his head. ‘Never heard of such a
thing.’
Lang smirked at Denton and muttered, ‘We’ve done it
again and again; it’s just—’ He smiled at Frewn. ‘Of course there’s
a balance in Mr Denton’s account, Mr Frewn.’
‘No idea.’
‘There is, of course there is. So please, have Mr
French write a cheque for the full amount for Mr Denton to take
with him when he goes.’
The old man sucked in his breath.
‘Today?’
‘Now, Mr Frewn, this is too bad of you - of course,
today - look here, I’m writing it out so you’ll have something on
paper, eh? An authorization, all right? “Balance of account to this
date, to be paid by cheque—” That’s quite clear, eh?’
He came around the desk and put the sheet of paper
into the old man’s hand; he brought it close to his eyes, and his
breath hissed in again. He muttered something, in which Denton
caught only ‘ruin’, and patted off up the corridor, his voice
mumbling on. Denton saw, as he left the doorway, that he was
wearing carpet slippers that were almost hidden by remarkably long
trousers, possibly somebody else’s, possibly his own from some
earlier, longer-legged self.
‘Mr Frewn is rather a character,’ Lang said. ‘Quite
the stuff of legend in the firm. I don’t know what we’d do without
him.’
‘He’s the accountant?’
‘Ah, no, not—He’s actually a, mm, the—Mmm. Hard to
explain - rather a vestige of an older way of—’ He smiled wanly.
‘He’s a kind of bottleneck for anything one wants to get done.’
Almost to himself, he added, ‘But things do get done. They really
do. You’ll see—’ He tapped some more on his desk, looked at The
Nightmare, and, apparently taking inspiration from it, said,
‘Well, this gets no books written. Not to pry, Denton, but - do you
want to pay us back the advance on the book you’ve so rashly thrown
away?’
‘Of course I don’t. I can’t.’
‘Then—’
‘Then I want to substitute The Machine for
it.’
Lang made a face. ‘On the same schedule?’
‘Can’t be done. There isn’t time, Lang.’
‘No-o-o, there isn’t. Well, I suppose an extension
of six months—’
‘During which I have to live.’
‘One would assume so, yes. Yes, quite.’ Lang
squeezed the bridge of his nose between long, thin fingers. ‘You’re
going to ask for more money, aren’t you?’
‘It won’t hurt you to raise the advance on the book
I trashed to something like what my books actually command. ’
Lang rapped on the desk with a knuckle. Denton fell
silent; it was as if the editor had called a meeting to order. Lang
gave another, more decisive rap, and sat up very straight. ‘I told
you I have an idea,’ he said.
Denton looked at him, thinking, My God, not a
book idea—
‘Transylvania,’ Lang announced. He sat back.
‘There!’
‘Transylvania.’ Denton had the vaguest idea what
Transylvania was. He lacked the British elite’s passion for travel,
usually for sport - Norway for salmon, Switzerland and beyond for
game - and lacked as well the Latin that might have led him to make
a translation of the word. But he was honest. ‘What is
Transylvania?’
‘Oh, my dear!’ Lang tittered. ‘It’s the far end of
the Alps, the place everyone was thinking of when they used to
write about haunted castles and ghastly vales and mountain peaks. A
place of legend and lore - and peasants who speak unintelligible
languages.’ He leaned forward. ‘Werewolves! Vampires!’
‘Fairy tales.’
‘My dear Denton, I’ve made a study of
vampires. Hardly fairy tales, unless very grown-up ones. Did you
know there was a play called The Vampire way back before our
dear Queen was crowned? Now Stoker’s gone and written
Dracula, and why, oh, why didn’t you get in ahead of him
with the idea?’
Denton shook his head. ‘Sucking blood? Doesn’t
interest me.’ Although the mind, he thought, of somebody who
believed he was a vampire would interest him.
‘The vampire in the old play had to marry a virgin
before sunrise or die. Doesn’t that touch a chord in you,
man?’ It didn’t, and Denton let his stoic face say so, although he
had a brief and bad moment thinking again about his wedding night.
Lang put a pleading note into his voice. ‘They rise from the
dead !’
‘So do my debts. I need money, Lang.’ He stuck out
his lips under his drooping moustache. ‘I can try to finish The
Machine in four months, how’s that?’ Lang made a face and
Denton said without conviction, ‘I suppose I could write about this
man who told me he’d seen a tart murdered - it was in the
newspapers—’
‘You cannot! I won’t let you.’ Lang sounded like a
petulant child. ‘Real crime’s been quite taken over by the lowest
kind of journalist; you’d ruin your reputation by associating with
it. Prostitutes. Oh! Unspeakable mutilations, I suppose.’ He
shuddered. ‘No, no - I want literary material, Denton,
artistic material. Like the vampire. You may say it’s
sensational, and that of course is part of the point, but I believe
that there is something in vampirism that touches us.
Deeply. Blood - insatiability - the application of great force in
pursuit of a perverse sort of desire—’ He sighed and leaned back.
‘You don’t see it, I can tell. Oh, dear.’ He groaned, then threw
himself forward to try again. ‘Vampirism could do for you what
She-who-must-be-obeyed did for Rider Haggard!’
‘Haggard is claptrap.’
‘But claptrap that touches our souls, Denton!
There’s something in his fantastic stuff - something -
repellent but irresistible—Something - forbidden—A profoundly
desirable horror, how’s that?’
‘Like The Nightmare?’ Denton said.
‘Oh-h-h—’ Lang twisted in his chair in
disappointment. ‘Look here, I’ll talk to Gwen -’ Gwen was Wilfred
Gweneth, the publisher - ‘about your, ah, financial crise,
and I think I can get his approval to offer you expenses plus your
usual for a travel book about Transylvania. The Land of
Horrors. We’d make up an itinerary to take you to the sites of
legends and great tales - Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein, for
example; now you’ll say that’s Switzerland, I know, but—’
In fact Denton didn’t know; he’d never read
Frankenstein.
‘ - you could start there, poetic licence, and move
through Bavaria - isn’t that Monk Lewis territory? - and so on, and
then concentrate on Transylvania. You apply your great powers of
description, that relentless honesty that makes your work
so—’
‘Lang, I don’t give a hoot about legends and
lore.’
‘You’re so very vexing sometimes. You
Realist! Have you had lunch? We could walk to my club and
have a late lunch and talk this over—’
‘I have to meet with some women about a girl who
may have left school to get herself murdered. One of the desirable
horrors of everyday life in London.’ He boosted his hat and coat
back to his lap. ‘A travel book - me?’
Lang gave him a suddenly shrewd look. ‘Money, my
dear - you need money.’
‘You told me once never to write for money.’
‘I am an idealist. But you are a Realist. And your
creditors are literalists - they want twenty shillings in the
pound. Come now, Denton - I’m sure I can get you the money for the
right sort of book. A nice journey down the Rhine, some pleasant
miles by train - Continental railways are perfectly acceptable, I
believe - then, to be sure, a somewhat less luxurious mode of
travel in Transylvania itself - colourful local carts, an ancient
post-chaise, even a sledge—’
Denton was both angry and amused. He got up slowly
and then went behind his chair and leaned his forearms on the back.
Grinning none too pleasantly, he said, ‘A motor car to
Whatsylvania.’
‘That’s an appalling idea.’
‘I’ll do it that way - but that’s the only way I’ll
do it!’ Denton didn’t really mean it; it was simply something to
say to vent his sense of outrage. ‘By Motor Car to the Land of
Vampires.’
‘A motor car! That would ruin everything! It’s so -
so disgustingly modern.’
‘All the more reason. Combine the new with the old,
progress with legend and lore.’ He was improvising, atypically
manic. ‘Start from Paris - I could pick up a car there; they’ve got
thousands of them - and head east. Outrunning the werewolves in a
Panhard Twelve! Flying over the steppe on a fuel of garlic and
potato spirits!’
Lang was shaking his head and saying that Denton
was being too bad, simply too bad. ‘You’re ragging
me; I see what you’re doing. This is your little joke. Well, laugh.
Surely you don’t think we’d buy you a motor car. Gwen doesn’t mind
taking a flyer, but he’s not an outright idiot. Motor Car to the
Land of Vampires, indeed!’
‘Buy the machine, keep ownership while I do the
trip, sell it after. Famous motor car, used in Mr Denton’s
best-selling new book. You’d make a fortune, Lang.’
Lang sniffed. ‘I despise commerce and everything it
stands for.’
‘But you want me to write a book about horrors
because it will sell.’
Lang waved a hand. He put the left side of his jaw
on the thumb and three fingers of his left hand, the index finger
resting on his leathery cheek, and he said in a dry voice, ‘What I
had envisioned was some colourful narrative of native carts toiling
up the Alps.’
‘It might come to that. Motor cars aren’t much in
mountains - you did say there were mountains?’
‘The Transylvanian Alps, which are always
represented as the teeth of a saw.’
‘Motor-car enthusiasts would love it - conquering
the mountains. Breakdowns while the werewolves howl. Tyre punctures
in the dead of night. We run out of petrol and are pulled across
the snow by a team of vampires!’
‘Yes, make a joke of it. You’re the one who needs
money, not I.’
Denton hunched farther towards him over the chair
back. ‘So I am.’ He’d forgotten. He shrugged. ‘Actually, it doesn’t
seem such a bad idea, Lang.’
‘My dear Denton, motor cars—! They’re simply
- vulgar.’
Denton heaved himself up, laughing. He saw Lang’s
confusion and guffawed again. ‘So am I! So am I!’
Then Mr Frewn padded in with Denton’s cheque, which
was for seven pounds, five and ninepence. Denton, having expected
ten times as much, swore and rushed out.

The women whom Mrs Johnson had assembled in her
meagre parlour were both sceptical and respectful - he had paid up,
after all - and in their way not so different from the young whores
he had met with Janet Striker. A similar embarrassment and distrust
were plain. Denton tried to outline what he wanted, tried to guess
what the Schools Board’s bureaucracy would be, but one of the women
had worked there and could tell the others all about it, ignoring
him.
‘The lists are handwritten, a lot of them in an
appalling fist, and not at all up to date. The school heads aren’t
held to the fire; they’ve too much else to do.’
When it was clear that he wanted them to search the
lists for all of Greater London for the previous school year, one
of them laughed outright. When he had difficulty explaining what he
wanted, another muttered, ‘A local habitation and a name,’ and told
the rest that what he meant was that they were to search for a girl
named Ruth, who’d left school and who had a sister named Rebecca,
who hadn’t.
‘And if we find them?’
‘Then you’ll find their last name.’
‘And then? We’ll have only their school. Only their
town or village or ward.’
‘Then you’ll look for the family in the post office
directories. ’
He suggested the census, but they pointed out that
the last census had been taken in 1891. He went home and told
Atkins not to talk to him. Using pantomime, Atkins pointed him to
the mail, then took himself downstairs with his nose in the air,
like a music-hall comedian playing a duke.
Among the bills was a note from Janet Striker. They
could visit the Humphrey the next afternoon; she suggested that he
bring a letter attesting to his character.
Tomorrow would be Thursday. It would leave him only
one day to find the man who had now killed both the girl named Ruth
and the man named Mulcahy. On Saturday, if he found nothing, they
would rule that Mulcahy had killed himself while insane, and they
would close the case. He could go on looking after that, but he
sensed that he would not. He was about out of threads to wind on
his spool.
And why did it matter? Mulcahy was nothing to him,
nor the girl, either. Yet he thought of that thin body laid out on
the table at Bart’s, the murderer’s crude gashes and the surgeon’s
neat cuts, the men in rows around her watching, watching - and he
cared.
Lang wanted horrors. This would be horror, indeed -
meaningless, dehumanizing death, and his own failure to do anything
about it.
He went out again to Hector Hench-Rose to ask for a
character letter. Hench-Rose surprised him by being abject, ashamed
of his behaviour of the other day and pathetically ready to do
anything Denton wanted. Denton thought it odd - Hench-Rose was now
wealthy, presumably powerful or about to be, with a parliamentary
seat at his bidding, an estate, tenants, forelock-tugging ghillies,
as Denton imagined them - but Hench-Rose seemed desperate for
Denton’s approval. Odd, very odd - a need to have the world without
exception approve of him? Or something special about Denton? Or was
he, as Denton was with Atkins, caught in some snare of pride?
Denton, at any rate, liked him better for his discomfort; the truth
was, he had felt more comfortable with Hench-Rose the modestly poor
ex-officer than Hench-Rose the wealthy baronet.
‘My distinct pleasure, old man,’ Hench-Rose said as
he scrawled a note under the letterhead of the Metropolitan Police.
‘Want me to order the populace to cooperate or ask them? Asking’s
probably better - flies and vinegar, and so on. Hmm?’ Hench-Rose
proposed supper, promised no jokes, but Denton said he couldn’t,
had too much to do. A drink at the club? Would Denton consider an
expedition for salmon in February? Denton’s thought had been that
the one thing he needed, money, and the one thing Hench-Rose had,
money, was the one thing he couldn’t ask Hench-Rose for, although
he suspected that Hector would have started flinging notes on the
desk if he had asked for them. But Denton couldn’t ask.